Reuniting with Rose comic

Hey do you guys remember when i was talking about making a Steven Universe comic  and i even gave a preview warrior9100.deviantart.com/art… well here is the finished comic like i promised and just in time before the 2nd steven bomb this was supposed to be for the first one but didn't have it anywhere near finished so i said to my self if there is a 2nd one i would upload it then.

since the first few panel are hard to read even if you do a close up i will put down what they say

panel 1. Bilbo: I wonder if there are any missions we could go on Steven: Me too let's go see of there's any

panel 2. (they are about to leave)

panel 3. *a figure appears and bilbo stops and looks in amazement* Steven: Hey you alright?

panel 4. *bilbo continues to stare* Steven: Mr. Bilbo what's wrong

panel 5. Eddy off screen: Hey Steven

panel 6. *both steven and bilbo start staring*

panel 7.  Eddy: Look who's here.   Edd: Suprise hehe.. (and the figure that appeared earlier is Rose Quartz)

panel 8. Steven: Guys, is that really...

panel 9.  Steven: *voice breaking* Ok if this is a joke this is the meanest,cruelest.

panel 10.  Eddy: No,No,No,No,N-No we would never do anything THAT mean or cruel.

panel 11.  Edd: Precisely that statement couldn't be further from the truth. Steven, this is your mother.

panel 12.  Rose: My Goodness, Your even more beautiful then i could have ever imagined.

(panels 13 - 15 are self explanatory right)

panel 16. Edd: YES! we did great. Eddy: Hmm..

panel 17. Steven: But How?! I thought you said we couldn't both exist at the same ti..

panel 18. Steven: Wait what am i saying why am i even questioning this!

panel 19. Steven: I just so glad i could finally meet you! (hold on this panel for a second)

panel 20. Bilbo: My goodness, This is the most heartwarming moment i have ever seen hehe..

panel 21. Bilbo: i shall take my leave and let you two get reacquainted.

panel 22. Steven: Mr. Bilbo wait please don't leave.

panel 23. Steven: sorry it's just *sniff*

panel 24. Steven: I never got to meet my mom or know her well enough but now i can and so can you.

panel 25. Rose: So you most be the one the two gentlemen reffered to as Bilbo Baggins.

panel 26. Bilbo: Yes i am, It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance Mrs. Quartz.

what do you think?